76. using →used 此处表示被动含义，be used for“被用来去做”。

　　77. becoming前加of 固定短语: dream of 梦想做某事。

　　78. the →a 固定短语：in a short time在短时间内。

　　79. our→ his 此处指叔叔的生意，用his指代。

　　80. stead→steadily Grow指增长，不是系动词，故用副词修饰。

　　考点：短文改错

　　第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

　　假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)

　　注意：

　　1. 词数100左右;

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

　　【答案】

　　Dear Ms Jenkins,

　　I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.

　　In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.

　　Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【亮点】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。

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